JoesCrabshak's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Minitut#5 ClockDay Cursor]

Eh...

The tutorial wasn't bad, but their are better and more effective ways to make an MC mimic the mouse, (that was the easiest)

The better one;

//Starts here inside frame of desired mouse Movieclip
MovieClip1.onEnterFrame = function(){
Mouse.hide();
_root.MovieClip1._y = _root._ymouse;
_root.MovieClip1.x = _root._xmouse;
}// much more better and changable code.
//The y or x value can be easily altered.

ADR3-N responds:

I think I'll make a tuturial for both (with both)

[Saving Lily]

Phenominal

It was heartwarming.
It made my eyes water.
It made me wish for hope.
It made me wish that I could give it a higher score than 10.

[Wii Are Sold Out]

Roflmao.

It was spectacular, thats all I can say.

Who ever did the womens? voice acting did great.

But I think you should have gaven the employee more "bolded" eyebrows when he went off on her.

[Jacob VS. Bob]

if you don't like it,don't vote and write a review

Strange, thats what people normally need in their reviews...

It was an interesting application, but even on the part which seemed like you wanted to nail (such as the lightning) were obviously not done well enough.

******Positives:*****
-Loading Screen

-Sadly, thats about it.

*****Negatives: *****

-The sound was to loud and abnoxious

-You said "if you don't like it, don't vote and write a review on how it make it better" but thats what u need in all your movies. It seems as if your saying to your viewers, "Hey my movie isn't spectacular, but plz don't say it sucks."

-Believe it or not, but any GOOD flash application needs more than "a few hours"

- You should have had "Bob" at least moving away from your lightning or something, him standing them mimic'd the moving; "standing"

-It had no reason to be posted on newgrounds, no significance, and trufully nothing was accomplished within the course of this flash movie. Some flash movies work well this way, but they still have to be long enough to feel emersed, not a kid whose head u cannot see making lightning come out of his hands with no explanation of why this is happening...

Work on these, and this could become a decent movie.

fateblade responds:

Thanks for the great review!

[ScientLOLojyuuichi!!]

It was decent.

It was strong on many points and was negative on alot of other ones.

Positives:
It attacked a huge group of people, well.
The flash animation was above par.
The music was highly unique and entertaining.
It is worth being on the front page, (/worth watching)
Negatives:
The humor was that of spongebob squarepants. Newgrounds is everything for everyone, I am just someone who hate child humor. So should MOST straight teens.
The song, although unique and entertaining, had a dull non-catchy chorus.
The whole computer glitch part really ruined this flash for me, you probably put in one of your friends voices for Cruise when he said to blame ppl on the interwebs. then strangled another friend.
The scene with it showing the leader of anonymous didn't make any sense because... if you ACTUALLY researched you would hear "Anonymous" claim (on youtube) that their are no leaders to it's group.

Work on: The negatives I said.

[FF: Mixed in Balamb2(3/3)]

Great

Awesome Flash, why though, in the final fight (with Squall, Cloud, and Vincent) did non of them use their weapons?

Sides that, perfect.