JoesCrabshak's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Story of Kratos]

Phenominal

Mainly due to the fact of creating this for a class assignment and being able to get front page with it, yes I did read your long ass description. lol

KartuneHustla responds:

FINALLY Someone reads. Thanks for the review!

[Minitut#5 ClockDay Cursor]

Eh...

The tutorial wasn't bad, but their are better and more effective ways to make an MC mimic the mouse, (that was the easiest)

The better one;

//Starts here inside frame of desired mouse Movieclip
MovieClip1.onEnterFrame = function(){
Mouse.hide();
_root.MovieClip1._y = _root._ymouse;
_root.MovieClip1.x = _root._xmouse;
}// much more better and changable code.
//The y or x value can be easily altered.

ADR3-N responds:

I think I'll make a tuturial for both (with both)

[Jacob VS. Bob]

if you don't like it,don't vote and write a review

Strange, thats what people normally need in their reviews...

It was an interesting application, but even on the part which seemed like you wanted to nail (such as the lightning) were obviously not done well enough.

******Positives:*****
-Loading Screen

-Sadly, thats about it.

*****Negatives: *****

-The sound was to loud and abnoxious

-You said "if you don't like it, don't vote and write a review on how it make it better" but thats what u need in all your movies. It seems as if your saying to your viewers, "Hey my movie isn't spectacular, but plz don't say it sucks."

-Believe it or not, but any GOOD flash application needs more than "a few hours"

- You should have had "Bob" at least moving away from your lightning or something, him standing them mimic'd the moving; "standing"

-It had no reason to be posted on newgrounds, no significance, and trufully nothing was accomplished within the course of this flash movie. Some flash movies work well this way, but they still have to be long enough to feel emersed, not a kid whose head u cannot see making lightning come out of his hands with no explanation of why this is happening...

Work on these, and this could become a decent movie.

fateblade responds:

Thanks for the great review!

[Pot Head Bob and a gennie]

Humorous

Funny idea, the only 2 problems I could see (minor) was that the voices would seem to cut out at some time when the person was talking. And I think you should have made the volume a bit higher. Thats being extremly picky though, Ima picky guy =D

D3m0n1c707 responds:

Thanks for your feedback and i will keep that in mind when mking the next one.